Writers, want to make a good characterization or scene memorable? OK, not everything you write can be memorable, but you can heighten your writing’s impact if you’ll consider timing. I’m using “timing” here in the broadest sense: time of day, season, occasion, etc. Here are a few examples:
A young woman gets a much-anticipated phone call from the prominent researcher who’s offering her a job as his assistant. She’s happy. We’re bored. What if this call came at 3 a.m.? Same message, different time of day. That raises questions: is he drunk? Can she trust him? Is calling people at 3 a.m. just a quirk?
A woman holding a glass in one hand spills vodka while loading clothes into the washer. Suggests she has a drinking problem, right? What if she’s home alone while the family is attending church on Sunday morning?
An aspiring golfer spends three hours making nine-iron shots to a practice green. Obviously dedicated. But really determined to improve his short game if it’s January and there’s snow on the ground.
A young single mom who marries the man of her dreams is warned by her divorced mother-in-law that the groom’s father is a convicted child molester. Sobering. What if this communication takes place at the young woman’s wedding reception? Wow. (I didn’t make this one up.)
Your thoughts? Leave a comment.
Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.